So I just sent the final script to my mentor for one last review.
Here is a link to it, the title may change so I am counting this as the working title: The Pay Off_Script
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I enjoyed your script. I think you do a good job of building suspense. I have a few suggestions both with your screenplay formatting and some possible additions/changes. Looking forward to checking in in person soon!